Comments on: A Ghazal Embedded in my Thoughts https://amolak.in/web/a-ghazal-embedded-in-my-thoughts/ A Blog of Major General Surjit Singh (Retd) Fri, 04 Sep 2026 08:20:59 +0000 hourly 1 By: collskohli https://amolak.in/web/a-ghazal-embedded-in-my-thoughts/#comment-145823 collskohli Thu, 25 Apr 2019 17:59:55 +0000 http://amolak.in/web/?p=5122#comment-145823 urdu shayari ka mizaajjj
kuch aour hee hai
teachtein hain merey poet
Akhtar Jawad
of Pakistan

eh English poet
tuuu bhee urdu ka shayar poet hai
urdu aatee naheen
par mijaaz toe hai
zaika urdu ka

tere jubaan sey sun kar
humare dimaag se takra kar
hummein hee sharminda kar deta hai
quatil app hee naheen
hummeen hain sabhee

O ENGLISH INDO CANADIAN POET
TERE URDU HEE SUNNLAYNGAY SUBHEE

LIKHTA CHAL URDU MEI HEE SAHEE
MUBARIK hogi ek din tere shayari

not much difference
in HINDI AND URDU
shayar tuu bhee sahee

]]> By: Gohar Behzad https://amolak.in/web/a-ghazal-embedded-in-my-thoughts/#comment-145033 Gohar Behzad Sun, 17 Mar 2019 23:41:24 +0000 http://amolak.in/web/?p=5122#comment-145033 To surjit sing

Jis ghazal ke bare mien aap ne likhaa hia ye behzad lakhnavi ki shahkar ghazloon mien se aik hia. Iss gazal ki maqbooliyat pakistan se hooi.

Behzad lakhnavi ki Aik ghazal india mien bhi buhat maqbool hia Jise begum akhter ne gaa yaa

Deewana banana hia tu dewaana Bana dye
Warna kahien taqdeer tamasha Na Bana dye.

Aye jazba dil kaa mqtaa hia

Aye daste talab mera Zima aye daste sakhaa mera Zima
Iss dr pe tere gr koi bhi behzad saa saail aa Jaye

]]> By: s s malik https://amolak.in/web/a-ghazal-embedded-in-my-thoughts/#comment-141634 s s malik Tue, 18 Sep 2018 17:52:01 +0000 http://amolak.in/web/?p=5122#comment-141634 very motivating lines.

]]> By: Surjit Singh https://amolak.in/web/a-ghazal-embedded-in-my-thoughts/#comment-135245 Surjit Singh Thu, 23 Mar 2017 14:22:25 +0000 http://amolak.in/web/?p=5122#comment-135245 Dear KPJ
Thanks.
To appreciate this ghazal you need a perceptive mind. And every one is not as blessed as you!
Surjit

]]> By: Cdr KP Jani https://amolak.in/web/a-ghazal-embedded-in-my-thoughts/#comment-135244 Cdr KP Jani Thu, 23 Mar 2017 14:20:06 +0000 http://amolak.in/web/?p=5122#comment-135244 Resp Dear General, Sir,

What beautiful words ! What a melodious voice !

Bahot khoob !!

Regards;

KP

Cdr. K.P. Jani I.N. (Retd.)

at Ahmedabad

]]> By: Brigadier(Retd) K Harikumar https://amolak.in/web/a-ghazal-embedded-in-my-thoughts/#comment-135223 Brigadier(Retd) K Harikumar Wed, 15 Mar 2017 01:22:44 +0000 http://amolak.in/web/?p=5122#comment-135223 Music transcends the boundaries of language sir. The appeal is universal.

]]> By: Surjit Singh https://amolak.in/web/a-ghazal-embedded-in-my-thoughts/#comment-135217 Surjit Singh Tue, 14 Mar 2017 14:27:47 +0000 http://amolak.in/web/?p=5122#comment-135217 Thanks.
It was great meeting you and PP Singh ji yesterday.
I am working on Malnutrition theme.
SS

]]> By: Surjit Singh https://amolak.in/web/a-ghazal-embedded-in-my-thoughts/#comment-135216 Surjit Singh Tue, 14 Mar 2017 14:21:51 +0000 http://amolak.in/web/?p=5122#comment-135216 Hari,
I am glad that you appreciate Urdu.
Do you remember Capt Rao, who used to sing, “Daka to nahin dala…”
He did not understand the meanings, and yet he could regale us with the ghazal!
SS

]]> By: Surjit Singh https://amolak.in/web/a-ghazal-embedded-in-my-thoughts/#comment-135215 Surjit Singh Tue, 14 Mar 2017 14:19:33 +0000 http://amolak.in/web/?p=5122#comment-135215 Ramani,

Gems sparkle…and my eye spots them, because I have readers like you!!!
The beauty of these precious words lies in the ears of the beholders…
SS

]]> By: Surjit Singh https://amolak.in/web/a-ghazal-embedded-in-my-thoughts/#comment-135214 Surjit Singh Tue, 14 Mar 2017 14:16:54 +0000 http://amolak.in/web/?p=5122#comment-135214 Thanks, Buddy!
Why don’t you share some of your anecdotes with our readers?
SS

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